Monday, December 25, 2006

Stars "old poem"

hello" ya 3am el blog keifaak " i have very few time to say what i want to say so let's say it quick shall we today since i'm busy and have an exam i'll post an old and a very dear poem to me i was suppoed today to start writing about 2006 memories and how did it treat me but i still have no time as i have an exam tomorrow and i'm preparing a huge documentry on last year specially that i call it the year of change for me :D


well this poem stars as i said is one of my dearest poems it was like my 4th or 5th poem i wrote in my poetic history why did i write it?


ok here's the story i used to be in first secondary stage during this year i used to see everything from another point of view i used to meditate and watch the sky from my window at dawn :D i used to be free and i could visualize nature, anyway i was so interested in writing a poem to describe the stars and how i see them cause i used to like watching them so much, as in my mind they have many symbols, i used even to have MY STAR in the sky it used to light so haaard i used even sometimes to wake up in dawn specially to see it whatever......


.after i wrote this poem i submitted it to the culture workshop and was read on air by Dr.Sa7ar and actually i recieved really nice comments from both her and her guest i felt so proud of myself then ..one of her comments is that this poem can be reduced to much fewer lines she said i can replace all this poem with this part of it


Among all the stars I have my star
Which shines everyday inside my heart
And lights inside my soul the beauty of life


which is kind of true these three lines if u ask me what they mean i can get you dozens of meaning for these 3 lines specially ..................



amazingly i stopped writing these kind of poems dont know why i dont even have the time to look at the sky and see MY STAR the last time i saw it , was last year something like that i was so happy ANYWAYyyyyyyy............ i made long introduction cause as i said this poem is so special to me..... read it and hope u like it and i know i made it quick :D



Stars



Look at the stars at night


And feel the beauty of their light


And see how small are we


In a world where the stars lead


And look how they look so small


While they are bigger than us all


Every star looks so unique


Don't you feel the freedom everybody seeks


Among all the stars I have my star


Which shines everyday inside my heart


And lights inside my soul the beauty of life


Look at the sky before you sleep


To get a wise from the stars before you dream


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